Draft:

On that picture one of the players from the All Blacks is trying to shake hands with a player from the other team. the All Blacks and the players from the other table showing respect by looking at each other and shaking at the same time.

feedback:

Great work you try your best and I like what you said about the All blacks trying to shake their hand from another team and some of them need to make sense by the way keep it up.

Final:

On that picture one of the players from the All Blacks is trying to shake hands with a player from the other team. the All Blacks and the players from the other table showing respect by looking at each other and shaking at the same time.