I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Well Done you have done a good job. I like how you put photos and the feedback you have been given. Maybe next time you could make your screenshot bigger and clearer so we could see your writing. I like how you did attempts that is what my writing class does a lot as it improves my writing.Check out my blog when you have time please.
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Well done Kade you have done a great job and you Kade you are a great friend and it is the best blog and even you have done a great job but it as the best title ever.
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DeleteWell Done you have done a good job. I like how you put photos and the feedback you have been given. Maybe next time you could make your screenshot bigger and clearer so we could see your writing. I like how you did attempts that is what my writing class does a lot as it improves my writing.Check out my blog when you have time please.
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DeleteWell done Kade you have done a great job and you Kade you are a great friend and it is the best blog and even you have done a great job but it as the best title ever.
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