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Friday, 24 November 2017

this week for writing we were learning to make interesting stories with a twist at the end


Alarm call

,, Is the cat awake no good,,  thought the big and ugly Green monster.
,,MMMmmmmmm That plowe looks nice but how do I get it without waking the cat,, thought the big and ugly Green monster. But little does the monster knows  that cat is awake and trolling him. Suddenly the floor a huge loud Creeeeeed Then the cat jumped up and meows very loudly the monster started to back up And just before the monster reached the door 50 Cat Came rushing in and the monster ran and the cats follow the monster The monster ran upstairs and bumped into their cats owner holding a hunting rifle.The monster jumped out the window and ran when the cats owner was shooting and cats owner was missing and then the monster never came came going on.

The end


1 comment:

  1. Hi Kade, I really like your post and I like the story, I also like how you described the monster and I liked how there are Cats in the story. I think something that you could work on might be your punctuation or your spelling, otherwise good job.

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