I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Kade, Dom here. I really like your hook. It made me want to read more. I never knew that cats slept on your bed. Maybe next time you could put more than one sentence in each paragraph. Overall it is a great post.
Hello Kade, Dom here.
ReplyDeleteI really like your hook. It made me want to read more. I never knew that cats slept on your bed. Maybe next time you could put more than one sentence in each paragraph. Overall it is a great post.
thanks for the information Dom
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