I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Kade, Great Work I love this Blog Post about the Crime Scene. I like how you used some adjectives to describe what you saw. You work Is Brilliant. Your next step could be next time is you could put some similes
Hi Kade, Great Work I love this Blog Post about the Crime Scene. I like how you used some adjectives to describe what you saw. You work Is Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteYour next step could be next time is you could put some similes