WALT write an opinion story.
We read some books about a pigeon doing things like driving a bus and wanting to stay up late. My story is about whether or not a pigeon should have a walrus as a pet.
Please give me feedback about my writing.

Don't let the pigeon get a walrus!

I think it's wrong for the pigeon to have a walrus as a pet.

I think that if walrus will get hungry and he might eat the pigeon.

The Walrus is so big and the pigoen is so small, so who will be taking the other animal for a walk?

The pigeon can look after the walrus because he doesn't have any money because he doesn't have a job.

The pigeon shouldn´t get a walrus because he can't look after a pet.